Contrast Paragraph

Here's a great example of a contrast paragraph from class on Thursday:

     Jerry and Maury are both famous talk show hosts, but they have some differences.  Here are some.  Jerry Springer is a talk show host who comes on channel 50, and Maury's comes on channel 19.  Their shows come on at separate times.  Jerry comes on at 11 am to 12 pm, and Maury is from 12 am to 1 am.  Jerry Springer's show consists of drama while Maury's show is about mothers finding their baby's father.  Maury's show has been running for ten years, and Jerry's show has been on for 15 years.

1.  What could be cut?  What could be added?  Why?
2.  Is this block or point-by-point?
3.  Is everything in the best order?  What would you change if you could?